Cpt. Smurf

I feel that Harry Potter is a very good at being a plain book, nothing more. You can read it, its enjoyable and takes no mental effort. However, the extra ...

OK. I think that the Harry Potter books are a good read, once or twice. However, i do not understand why there is sooooo much hype about them because i ...

... After a rather badly-timed bright flash of obviously magical light, he found himself in the middle of a lake of chocolate. Surrounding him on the shores of the lake ...

Hi! I can't give you any advice on, say, style, as whichever style you naturally write in you will have to develop yourself. I can, however, tell you that the ...

Well, I find Harry Potter ultimately the better book. LOTR is so description-heavy, we don't need to read ten pages describing a mountain. I think the plot of LOTR is ...

To me Inheritance cannot compete with HP. I find Inheritance a complete rip-off of at least two other great series: Star Wars (plot-wise) and LOTR (world- and language-wise). Star Wars ...

Dreamer and flytodreams: thanks for your comments, glad you liked it! I changed all the necessary typos, although I think the British spelling of 'traveler' is spelt 'traveller', so I've ...

Revised and updated. I've decided to continue the story. Slight edit, though, I've changed the format of the novel, and a Prologue is no longer needed. * * * * ...

Granted, but in your ability to see through people's tricks you have become very suspicious and hostile, resulting in a lack of communication and break down in all relationships, whether ...

Well, I think my plot is fairly original, but it's changing all the time, and the plot as I have it at the moment is completely different from the much ...

Fruit

Umm, auf wiedersehn, i think

The fact that you can write down a whole life, or, in some cases, a whole world on a piece of paper is very gratifying. And being able to share ...

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